Reviews for Wrestling is Gay! |
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![]() ![]() Hot action! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great pleasure to read from start to finish. Amazing storyline and the flow of writing was flawless. Although, a few negative comments about your use of the words "come" and "came". They just didn't sound right to me. Although, they still fit. In this line : "When he looked up he saw his tormentors grinning godly face" I think "tormentors" is supposed to have an apostrophe; "tormentor's". I also noticed one other minor spelling error, but I can't find where it was :P Great job. Looking forward to reading more from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you certainly proved your point, haha! It was very good and pretty sweet too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol WOW. idk y, but that vaguely excited me a little lol & im a chick. o.O anyways, that was pretty interesting even though i almost expected it this time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehe, very funny (and now I know what you meant); I think this one is a lot better than mine's, and I have nothing but admiration: your writing is cleaner and easier to follow, and the plot was clever. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting idea. I like it. Wrestling is gay~yup yup. cool story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how you portrayed these two. You have a very good way of writing. I wish mine was as good. Good job. Maybe I'd love to see a continuence or a female/female pairing? :) |