|Reviews for My Memoir|
| Zireael07 chapter 30 . 5/30/2012
This is so awesome! Will there be more?
| xoxlizzie chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Awesome so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job!
| Apple chapter 10 . 3/4/2010
That's great that u have "cite" where u get the story of Chinese Lily, or u maybe have some copyright problem...
And does this story's setting in China or some part of Asia? because I saw some details that is talking about the Ming Dynasty, like the name of the Emperor.
I think it is better to tell the background of the story if u do have a setting, but if u are not meant to do it, the details are confusing. And I do not understand who are Tucaost? I mean is he from the West but he teaches Chinese?Or are u playing with the geography?
I think u still have not writhing to a very attracting point, so I cannot give a overall comment yet with this 10 good starting chapter
| Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Not bad...I like this kind of stories; I just read the first chapter and I would check it out even more
| Tawny Owl chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
It was a different setting for what seems to be a vampire story. Given that it would have been nice to see what things looked like, it seemed very matter of fact. Although there was a lot to get through, and Jade's voice seemed to suit that. She seems very accepting of her life, and how things are, but her observations make it feel like she isn't stupid. She seems aware of how things work and how to survive within the system.
I didn't get a very good impression of the prince or William. Background about why every one but the prince hated him would have made things clearer as well. Do they hate him just because he is white? or because of his personality? From what we do see he does seem like a demon indeed.