Reviews for My Memoir |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "My Memoir" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some of your characters for your stories or something like coverart for your story so that would be my truly honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm. Discord: jasminelucas12 Instagram: jasmineluc_official Email: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so awesome! Will there be more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great job! |
![]() ![]() That's great that u have "cite" where u get the story of Chinese Lily, or u maybe have some copyright problem... And does this story's setting in China or some part of Asia? because I saw some details that is talking about the Ming Dynasty, like the name of the Emperor. I think it is better to tell the background of the story if u do have a setting, but if u are not meant to do it, the details are confusing. And I do not understand who are Tucaost? I mean is he from the West but he teaches Chinese?Or are u playing with the geography? I think u still have not writhing to a very attracting point, so I cannot give a overall comment yet with this 10 good starting chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not bad...I like this kind of stories; I just read the first chapter and I would check it out even more |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a different setting for what seems to be a vampire story. Given that it would have been nice to see what things looked like, it seemed very matter of fact. Although there was a lot to get through, and Jade's voice seemed to suit that. She seems very accepting of her life, and how things are, but her observations make it feel like she isn't stupid. She seems aware of how things work and how to survive within the system. I didn't get a very good impression of the prince or William. Background about why every one but the prince hated him would have made things clearer as well. Do they hate him just because he is white? or because of his personality? From what we do see he does seem like a demon indeed. |