Reviews for The Almighty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, this is definitely worth continuing if you're still around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please tell me you're brimming with ideas and are furiously typing away? |
![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying it; I'd love to read more. Their interaction is fun and modern and quick. There was one thing that I noticed...You kept using the word effected. It should be affected. There's a difference, and it's hard to explain. I think of "affected" or affect as the verb, whereas effect as the noun. "It created an effect." "he was affected by his presence". That might seem like splitting hairs, but it's like people saying "brought" when they mean "bought". One of those niggling things. Excepting that, I really enjoyed reading it insofar and I look forward to more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved the first chapter, you've got me hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() mhm *nods frantically* very, very much so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow...This is...WOW.. I'm speechless, but because I want you to know how good this is, I'm going to say something. (If that even made sense...) I ABSOLUTELY love this! I've never read a story like this, I'm hooked. It is TOTALLY worth continuing! Hope to see an update from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh god. i can't help it. i'm hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute and deep at the same time. I like the narrator. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really gud...keep it up:D:D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can honestly say I've never read anything like this. I like the idea and I like the male character. The female is strange to me though I suppose she's meant to be. That's why he likes her, because she's different. So you wrote her well enough that I feel about her the way he does. Very good start. I can't wait to see where it goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far, update soon! |