Reviews for Patience: The Journey Through my Subconscious
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 2/11/2010
Great! Keep your head held high. -Hugs-
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
I love this!
Isca chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
"This clearing we come to [...] this room, that bed." I swear I know this feeling; it's like a cold chill, a haunting, a nightmare that won't leave you in the morning. I love this line!
Isca chapter 3 . 1/24/2010
"Turquoise eyes like lightning." I've never heard anyone describe lightning as "turquoise" before. I love it. Turquoise is one of my favourite colours too. :)
Isca chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
"Little One?" God. Just wow. I love the tone of this line. The question mark makes the tone so terrifying and chilling.
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Great! Loved it!

"Sweet little girl with her

hair loose and pin-straight.

It spills over her shouders

like a lion's mane."
Isca chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
"Beneath a sheet, a whisper, I hear her stir." This line is quite impactful. Whew. I just love "Patience," you know? She's such a dear-heart. Such an innocent being. :)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I like last stanza. It's interesting because I'm not 100% sure if the She is a personification of patience or it's an actual person. Either way fits well.

The descriptions are really great. I especially love the second two lines of the second stanza. Really powerful description.

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