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| zagato chapter 12 . 12/31/2018
This is great, I also read your story because of charliej.
| zagato chapter 5 . 12/31/2018
This is great, thank you!
| Augusta chapter 9 . 2/4/2014
I love this story; however, you mix up your words sometimes. In one of the previous chapters you typed "feat" when it should have been "feet". You also have a tendency to use the wrong there(place)/their(possessive pronoun)/they're(contraction meaning "they are"). These are pretty minor mistakes, most likely typos. You're such a great writer-don't let a small thing like typos get in the way!
| AKhwab chapter 23 . 6/1/2013
I feel you about the part where you said you aren't as gifted as all the other authors on Fictionpress! I too spend more time reading instead of writing. But you're really creative, innovative and hardworking. Good job :)
| AKhwab chapter 22 . 6/1/2013
This story has been wonderful :) Your chapters are still steeped with mistakes though. You have spelling errors here & there. And you seem to like to use "your" instead of "you're" or "you are". It kinda annoying to read that. I like how you never changed Sam. She always remained independent in her way. I've gotta say tho, the chemistry between Sam & Marcus isn't really obvious in the entire story. You've got to work on that :) You know the family tree you mentioned in this chapter? What did the dotted line mean? I'm looking forward to the sequel! :D Hopefully, it'll contain lesser mistakes.
| AKhwab chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
Eeee freaky. Why didn't the creep just abduct her?
| AKhwab chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
When I read the title of your chapter, I literally winced cos you spelled 'Prologue' as 'prolougue' but then I read your chapter and I was surprised. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes. You wrote well. Though it's a little confusing.
| jackalomoose chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
What happened to the newer/edited version you were doing of this story? I thought I had seen it and maybe read some of it, but maybe you took that one down as well? Either way, the story is great.
| animari93 chapter 23 . 12/18/2012
Very original! I enjoyed it.
| OrangeKiss chapter 22 . 9/23/2012
Marvelous story. It was breathtaking. I loved how Marcus and Sam acted all cute together. I hope you'll post the sequel soon! )
| witeaya chapter 22 . 6/14/2012
had fun reading this.
thank god that creep aiden is finally dead.
is this the end?
| R. Ficst chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
so, to start with, "grammer" should be spelled "grammar." ;)
| rachelontheramble chapter 4 . 2/19/2012
Another great chapter! But I'm still undecided on how doggy Sam was acting, albeit cute and all.
Some proofing thoughts include:
Is she stuck like this can I have her?" - needs a question mark after this and c in can should be capitalized.
The boys name was Darren- apostrophe after boy and before s
creek- should be creak.
alphas name- missing apostrophe- should be alpha's
| rachelontheramble chapter 3 . 2/19/2012
Hi! Really intrigued by the premise of the story and eagerly reading on. Just one thing: Twice 'rogue' has been spelt as 'rouge' in this chapter.
| Novocaine for the Soul chapter 22 . 9/27/2011
I really enjoyed this. Sam and Marcus are very cute together. I can't wait for the sequel.