Reviews for Forbidden Love! |
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![]() ![]() Very well done. Love Allison's character! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and the way it's being told, the plot is very captivating and more than intriguing. I was either smiling or laughing throughout the whole read, the humor was spot on and I could practically see the whole scene play out in my head. You have a beautiful talent for writing and I hope that you pick this story back up soon, it would be a shame to let such a nice story go to waist. Update Soon Please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sexual tension between Diane and Allison is brilliant and so different a mother having a thing for your sons wife now that's different. I'm really enjoying this story. I'm already. routing for allison and Diane even though its a bad situation falling for your sons wife. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I'd love to read more when you post the next chapter. If you hadn't noticed I've been stalking your stories Kinda like Diane XD Creepy huh? But you're a really good writer and don't have very many mistakes in your stories. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story really hope you pick it up again |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is really addictive! I want more! Update soon |
![]() ![]() Quite entertaining, I'm eager to see where this goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh interesting developments Interested in seeing where the dinner goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it looks like the best laid plans of mice and women just took a nose dive! A attempt to get Jesse away from Helen for a evening just took a hit! I wonder if and hwne Jess is going to tell Helen how she feels about her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta say that I am in love with this story. I love the banter between the two, its just so funny. You had me laughing throughout the whole time I was reading this. I really love your characters as well they are so believable and the story so far is really great and refreshing. Please update soon I would really like to see where this story is goes ). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you should update faster... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always happy to see you update Shane, Lots of fun stuff this chapter as well lol, I can't wait to read the next one from Diane's point of view, seeing as she almost purposely made all the stuff this chapter come about. |
![]() ![]() This is suck a great story.I only ask you to update sooner...:] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Easy Allison! You never know where things might lead you to. After all, Diane HAS been coming on to you. I say, take her up on it and see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. |