Reviews for In comes the Rain
WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
i love this poem because i can relate to it

Whenever i'm feeling sad, and i need to cry, but i'm too ashamed to cry, i wait until the next thunderstorm, and i take a walk.

It's really quite sad, but true, and i love how i can bring up memories when i read this poem.

Good job :)

~WriterOnTheMove~
sealednectar chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Wow, this was fantastic! You're really great at poetry. I loved the rhythm and the imagery the words evoke. Good work.

sealednectar
Your-Magpie chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
:') i wish i wrote this.

and i have to say, one of the best beginnings to a poem i've read.

and it ties in with the ending.

i love it when it does that.

and thanks for my reviews btw, and the con crit was just what i needed (these days on fpress people are too nice!)

lol, for you id just say write more ;)
Karyn13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Wow, that was an awesome poem. It was really easy to understand, yet you can take it in so many different ways. This is probably the best poem I have ever read on fictionpress! Congrats
AwesomeEyes chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Wow, your really good at this. I wish I could write poems like you.

Eyes
FireOkami-Kitsune chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
Geez... That's kinda sad... Not your writing, the poem, lol. I like this. I can see someone actually being like this, so it makes you wonder. Did someone inspire you to write this? The only bad thing I can come up with is that its short, but I'm just picky like that. I hope you get more reviews soon! ;)