Reviews for Round One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have a same incident..I kinda have dream about a Guy in my school and every time the scene change but he always same there..that really freaked me out but one strong point is I have crush on him but it just merely a crush nothing serious...thank God I haven't those incident but maybe that's why I don't have a Guy like Jake xD waahh this story is really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! |
![]() ![]() Ugh, so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, just brilliant ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man it's so cute! xx Ali |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Sweet. Brother's best friend cliché will never grow old. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing seemed wrong with it to me. In fact, I thought it was great. It's not exactly an original story, but it was written well enough to make up for that. Thanks for a great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw ! so uncliche! cute. :D well i think its uncliche . |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I had to work on an English essay just now AFTER taking down my Christmas tree. Ugh. ..And then I read this and now I'm happy again. :). I really enjoyed how you developed this. Sure the plot is a little cliche, but I think that when timeless cliches are done right they're just better than anything else out there. :). Case in point, THIS STORY. It didn't feel rushed at all, and your characters had, well, character! Plus a happy ending (and pretty impeccable grammar). Which was, you know, EXCELLENT. So well done here. :). Now I'm off to splurge on your other stories. Ta ta. :). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! I've been reading a lot of one shots and they all seemed okay, but not written too well, but yours was great! Loved it and I just had to review! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really sweet.!. I love the fact that they have so much history... it's beautiful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw. :-D yayie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. ] I really like Quinn. Do you think you could write a story with her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw...so cute. I liked it :) Ri |