Reviews for Round One
annayh44 chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
I have a same incident..I kinda have dream about a Guy in my school and every time the scene change but he always same there..that really freaked me out but one strong point is I have crush on him but it just merely a crush nothing serious...thank God I haven't those incident but maybe that's why I don't have a Guy like Jake xD waahh this story is really good!
PenguinLover33 chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Ugh, so cute!
theKnobblyKneedWriter chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
Oh, just brilliant ;)
GittaStar chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
This is awesome!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Man it's so cute!


Alkali.Alias chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Aw. Sweet. Brother's best friend cliché will never grow old.
Anara Celebvilya chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Nothing seemed wrong with it to me. In fact, I thought it was great. It's not exactly an original story, but it was written well enough to make up for that.

Thanks for a great read!
mesweetescape chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
aw ! so uncliche! cute. :D

well i think its uncliche .
windyday chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
So I had to work on an English essay just now AFTER taking down my Christmas tree. Ugh. ..And then I read this and now I'm happy again. :).

I really enjoyed how you developed this. Sure the plot is a little cliche, but I think that when timeless cliches are done right they're just better than anything else out there. :). Case in point, THIS STORY. It didn't feel rushed at all, and your characters had, well, character!

Plus a happy ending (and pretty impeccable grammar). Which was, you know, EXCELLENT. So well done here. :). Now I'm off to splurge on your other stories. Ta ta. :).
Sacred flower chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I loved it! I've been reading a lot of one shots and they all seemed okay, but not written too well, but yours was great! Loved it and I just had to review!
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
That was really sweet.!.

I love the fact that they have so much history... it's beautiful :)
TumbleWeed23 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
aw. :-D yayie!
asianinvasion0530 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Cute. ]

I really like Quinn. Do you think you could write a story with her?
balloonfista chapter 1 . 1/9/2010 cute.

I liked it :)

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