|Reviews for Last Chance|
| thewhimsicalbard chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
When you say "gunnin," it would really help if you did the appropriate thing, namely to type it as "gunnin'."
I can kind of see this being a song, but I think it's just a poem. I can't really tell though. Sometimes it feels like the rhythm in general is just a little bit off to me. Most of the time, it flows pretty well that way, but I finished the poem with a sense of rhythmic imperfection.
Other than that, a good poem with a neat message. Inspired by the Boss, perhaps?
I do hope you know who that is.
Without googling it.