Reviews for Tasting the Wild Side
GirlxAnachronism chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Fantastic. This poem captures my summer so poetically. My ability to relate really makes me love this poem. Also, you understood the feelings of someone desiring to step out the box magically. There is a subtle glamor associated with being "the bad girl." You adressed that in the same fashion, with subtle hints at how "glamorous" being "that girl" would be. At the same time, the fearless of the girl and the poem rings with a sadness from loneliness and disrespect.

"a girl like that

has.

no.

fear."

Loved it, very powerful
steffxnie chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
The formatting creates a nice effect. I really enjoyed reading this.

I love this part most.

'She wants other people

to ask

who's that?

with a little bit of

starstruck awe

in their words.

and her name will be

whispered

in voices that

taste like

alcohol.

and.

sin.'

Well written. Keep writing! :D