Reviews for Shuttering Internal
classic violet chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
Interesting, I like it, especially the last set of lines.
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
ghostly. using any other words to summarize my feelings here would just do the poem injustice. ghostly.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I got a clear since of the narrator behind outside themselves. It was much less an internal piece, but more of the speaker noticing what has become of those around them, denying it for as long as possible, yet eventually doomed to become one of the status quo.

A great peice, although I did find it a bit short. Keep up the good work.

Much love,