|Reviews for Lamb to Slaughter|
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
Aw! -Hugs- I love this though.
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 7 . 2/28/2010
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 6 . 2/28/2010
Great! So descriptive.
"These crimson stained walls
I wander here drenched.
Scarlet drizzles down like rain."
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
I love this! I can really relate to it.
"I owe nothing to them
it has all run out so
go to someone else for your sick
leave me alone
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 2/28/2010
"They always warn you
about strangers but her
monster wasn't a stranger.
She used to be afraid of monsters
now she sees who they really are- cowards."
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
"These little secrets
not even you
knew what you
| ripplingebbulience chapter 9 . 2/26/2010
Intense and then suddenly different...
I like it.
| Isca chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
"A Valkyrie." Powerful.
"Who never saved themselves from their own fate." Good message. I'm tired of those fairy-tale girls. Give me empowerment and a warrior-woman who shapes her own destiny. :)
"It grew like a dandelion in the dark." EXCELLENT SIMILE! :D
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
| Isca chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
"Backed up against a bolted door." There's something subtly sensual about the tone here (which is very interesting considering that this line is probably a 'bad' thing since it's referring to child abuse; still, I like it).
| Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
| Isca chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
LOL. Just so you know, I love the fact that the A/N is longer than the poem itself. I like when the writer leaves their own interpretation.
"God, why didn't you save me?" I asked myself that same question when I was younger.
I love the repetition of the biblical line: "The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not want." It's beautiful.
"Still warm." God, that's heavy. I also like the way in which it connects to the line: "Take a knife and flay the skin off." Very chilling.
| Narq chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Like always, this is a lovely piece. The power in the words bring tears to my eyes. Yes, that's simply how strong it is.
You have a talent for writing.
You are precious to this world. Don't let anyone tell you elsewise, and, I don't care if you don't don't believe in god. I don't either.