Reviews for Lamb to Slaughter
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
Great!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 8 . 2/28/2010
Aw! -Hugs- I love this though.
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 7 . 2/28/2010
Great!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 6 . 2/28/2010
Great! So descriptive.

"These crimson stained walls

I wander here drenched.

Scarlet drizzles down like rain."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
I love this! I can really relate to it.

"I owe nothing to them

it has all run out so

go to someone else for your sick

twisted desperation,

leave me alone

I'm gone."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 2/28/2010
Great!

"They always warn you

about strangers but her

monster wasn't a stranger.

She used to be afraid of monsters

now she sees who they really are- cowards."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 2/28/2010
Great!

"These little secrets

that nobody

not even you

knew what you

pushed away."
ripplingebbulience chapter 9 . 2/26/2010
Intense and then suddenly different...

I like it.

Keep writing.

-Rippling ebullience
Isca chapter 3 . 2/18/2010
"A Valkyrie." Powerful.

"Who never saved themselves from their own fate." Good message. I'm tired of those fairy-tale girls. Give me empowerment and a warrior-woman who shapes her own destiny. :)

"It grew like a dandelion in the dark." EXCELLENT SIMILE! :D
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
Great!
Isca chapter 2 . 2/12/2010
"Backed up against a bolted door." There's something subtly sensual about the tone here (which is very interesting considering that this line is probably a 'bad' thing since it's referring to child abuse; still, I like it).
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Great!
Isca chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
LOL. Just so you know, I love the fact that the A/N is longer than the poem itself. I like when the writer leaves their own interpretation.

"God, why didn't you save me?" I asked myself that same question when I was younger.

I love the repetition of the biblical line: "The Lord is my shepherd, I shall not want." It's beautiful.

"Still warm." God, that's heavy. I also like the way in which it connects to the line: "Take a knife and flay the skin off." Very chilling.
Narq chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Like always, this is a lovely piece. The power in the words bring tears to my eyes. Yes, that's simply how strong it is.

You have a talent for writing.

You are precious to this world. Don't let anyone tell you elsewise, and, I don't care if you don't don't believe in god. I don't either.

Narq.