Okay I REALLY love the characters and the idea of this story - a boarding school in England. Like, words can't even describe how good your story is, honestly. But the only thing that made me groan was some of the dialogue.

Example:

“Well I guess this is time to confess that she cheated on you with me,” Sam sighed with a shrug. Jonah glared playfully.

“I aint got a clue why I’m hanging out with you folks.” Hannah said.

If you say this out loud to yourself, it just doesn't sound right, you know what I mean? It looks good written down, but in all reality, I don't know if people will say those kinds of words out loud. Ha, maybe it could just be me though :)

Also, can we have more physical description of the characters? They all sound mighty fascinating :)

I like this. It must have been hard to distinguish between the different male and female speakers but I think you did that well. Update soon! )

Oh! I'm totally liking this! Update soon! XD

-Kayleigha

Interesting. Will like to see how this turns out!

Hope

xx

Oh, can't wait :)