Thank you so much for your reviews. I am excited to be able to communicate with another poet that likes rhythm and rhyme.I do have two questions though. Where are you getting your subject matter and are you trying to use a rhythm count? I always use some sort of count pattern in my rhyming poems.

Gina

Hello Mr. Mahler,

First, I would like to thank you for your earlier review on my poem The Silent Walker. It pleased me greatly! I will be putting up more of my poems soon.

So, it is my turn to return the favor. I like your poem. It is short and simplistic, though the short verses clearly convey the haunting, strong bond between you (mankind) and mother Nature. I also liked the rhymes you did. I especially adored the last line of your poem; it made me think back to your earlier verse which says "so perfect together I could cry". Typical Nature: so perfect, so beautiful it is eerie, haunting... The only thing you could improve is your punctuation; it unfortunately detracted sometimes from the beauty of your poem. (capitalization; and misspelled words like metamorphosis)

Otherwise, great job! I'll review more of your works later on.