Reviews for Two Guys and One Girl: BAD COMBO!
AshTempest chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
You are hilaious, you made me laugh.

I'm happy,

that your Rafi spoke to you for the first time.

And you are lucky that you inspirarion of male haracters are actually realistic. I wish I had that in my male characters of my story too.

Well anyways, there is something I noticed about your story.

I don't want o upset you,but your wrong.

Your chapters are too short!

I hope you do make them longer,because I dislike the feeling of anxiousness.

I hope your not mad about what I just said. Or annoyed that I wrote this review long. Sorry, I dont usually write tis length.

~Ash
Sakura Suzume chapter 10 . 7/23/2010
OMG I liked this chapter and I also LOVE Lovely Complex lol GO AMAZON! Lol. The Urgent message was really important no sarcasm.
Sakura Suzume chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
HUGE cliffy update soon! haha I bet you're happy that you saw him shirtless! hahahaha great chapter update soon! XD
Sakura Suzume chapter 8 . 7/9/2010
Haha I feel so bad for her! Gez she just had to run into Rafi. Of all people right? I liked this chapter a lot I think it is my favorite so far. XD
Sakura Suzume chapter 7 . 7/9/2010
Haha "Mother its business not pleasure" that line made me crack up! It was a shorty yet a great chapter!
Sakura Suzume chapter 6 . 7/9/2010
I liked this chapter! Haha Ke$ha I liked how you added the ringtone it's one of my favorite songs of all time!
Sakura Suzume chapter 5 . 7/9/2010
WOW... Great chapter I loved everything about this chapter.
Sakura Suzume chapter 4 . 7/8/2010
Funny and cute chapter. This story is really really good! XD
Sakura Suzume chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
This is such a cute story! I really like it
Sakura Suzume chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
great story so far. It made me laugh a lot! I'll review to every chapter I read! XD
Riley T chapter 9 . 7/7/2010
OMG you Lucky girl haha loved this chapter are you going to continue i hope you do
Riley T chapter 8 . 7/7/2010
haha he fell asleep
Riley T chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
haha i laughted at her moms reaction i whats going to happen when she sees Rafi still cant belevie hes real
Riley T chapter 6 . 7/7/2010
ooh whats going to happen? cant wait
Riley T chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
No way they're real are you serious totally jealous hey i wonder if they'll ever find out what would you think if they ever did ? great story so far im really looking forward to the next part
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