Reviews for Eye wide open, Eyes shut tight
TheMobBunny chapter 17 . 1/4/2012
I am in love with your story
ktinamarie chapter 90 . 3/17/2011
this book is amazing It actually made me make an account up just so I could review it...the only thing is next time take your time typing it up ) some of the errors threw me off. But the details and everything wuz just awedome. Forgive me for some of my errors I had 2 use my cell phone2write this review
Hiddenphrases chapter 4 . 2/24/2011
Man, that's odd, why did you name the chapter "Man" ?
Hiddenphrases chapter 3 . 2/24/2011
"idiot" poor guy that's harsh. Oh well, also "you grandma yells at me for entering her house" something like that... She needs to calm down, lol.
Hiddenphrases chapter 2 . 2/24/2011
Huh, what's up with the Texas accentthing? And you didn't specify which Washington. Cos I didn't here a difference when I went to dc a few years back, but I guess it's still considered the south( lol, I am a Texan). At least she isn't from Louisiana, ugh, now they sounds ignorant. Oh in the second paragraph at the end where it says "I seen I thought" idk, something is wrong there. Try reading it outloud. There was something else too but I can't remember... Oh yes, I remember now "her in Washington..." just thought I would point those out for ye.
Hiddenphrases chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Short, I like your writing style but I like anything that isn't present tense. I HATE present tense. I get confused because I'm not used to it. It distracts me lol. I will read more. Not right now though, I have school, three tests today, yay tests...
Darkfairy102 chapter 84 . 5/29/2010
That was a great chappie!
Darkfairy102 chapter 58 . 5/29/2010
I knew something like that was going to happen! Poor Yami xD

Darkfairy102 chapter 40 . 5/29/2010
Didn't see that coming. Great story so far.

Darkfairy102 chapter 35 . 5/29/2010
That was interesting.

Darkfairy102 chapter 22 . 5/29/2010
I can see it beginning to get exciting. Can't wait to read more.

Darkfairy102 chapter 15 . 5/29/2010
That was a bit surprising.

Darkfairy102 chapter 11 . 5/29/2010
Haha. That was funny.

Darkfairy102 chapter 6 . 5/29/2010
It's not bad. Though, I have noticed a few punctuation errors, but those will get better with time.

Darkfairy102 chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
It's not very boring, actually. The introduction of the character kind of makes me want to read more.

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