Spider. Lost it completely. Brilliant for humour. Chances of fooling mom, zero. Looks like I already reviewed the last chapter, so in case it wasn't this bit here it is again. Lisa is conspicuously absent, wtf? Cal is a pig and should have two black eyes, one each from Danny and Adi, or a least a good Charlie Horse.

Adi didn't reciprocate? Selfish. Now looking forward to revenge on Lisa, pls pls pls let me be right.

Cats love me, I have been furniture for cats longer than you've been alive. I'm fluffy to use Gabriele Isglasias' term, I know that's not spelled correctly, moving on. I love stories where the nice guys end up together, happy endings, I know, it's not the end, so thank you. Humour is wonderful.

I laughed out loud at "So..." Well, wasn't that epically awkward." I mean it's not funny, but it is hilarious sort of. Just tension relief. Great comedy.

I am so confused i thought Mr and Mrs Smith were Dannys parents who kicked him out

Can I have Amy? I'm rather jealous of Cal.

Cal kind of fluctuates between being a total jerk and a teasing friend. It's a little weird. Love this story, though.

i love this story

I thought Daniels parents were the smiths and adi's. Were the johnsons

Fucking loved it! Gotta love hot smexy boys! The ending was a bit bitter sweet for me but all together I felt like the story was wrapped up nicely. Thank you for sharing!

AWWWWW ASSFGKL I LOVED THIS SO MICH THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. So sweet. I'm flipping out in happiness and can't stop "aww"ing. Love this.

Hey ho,

first thing: nice story! I really like it so far.
Anyways, what I wanted to tell you - I'm from Germany and well, nobody wears Lederhosen over here outside Oktoberfest :D that's a Bavarian thing, it's like saying all Americans dress up as cowboys.
And then, "Listen!" translates into "Hör zu/ Hören Sie zu", and the part about inappropriate behaviour is "Hören Sie auf (damit)! Das ist unanständiges Benehmen!"
Did you use google translator? It usually doesn't work as every language uses different expressions. :)
And now I'm going back to reading, I'm dying to know what happens next :D
Greetings from Europe,

Ele

Holy Christ, they're Smith & Jones. Now I know I'll die if they don't end up together.

I squealed when I read that the main character only likes the subjects English and German, because those are the only ones I like as well. xD

i feel so pervy reading this lol :3