Hello!

That final verse summed things up pretty accurately!

WOW. I really love this. I think my favorite line is that last one, "wading through my frozen lakes of discarded love,in this circumstance i'll chance her."

I love the way that just fits together and creates such a powerful thought with only a few words.

You've got some great imagery interspersed here. I especially liked the last two lines and "in this circumstance I'll chance her."

...holy... shit. excuse my language, but i don't see haw you can think my stuff is good when your poetry is this amazing! Rhyme and rhythm, perfect, beautiful. And some very memorable lines "to understand is to stand under, i look deep into your mind to bone pick and unearth your wonder" effing brilliant. and i know you probably do, but i just have to ask, do you perform your work? because if you don't you really should.

I like the verse 1, it's like a mental game. love is like that.

good poem.

fantastic poetry sir