Reviews for Goodbye
Vector Phantom chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
It miiiiiiight help if you'd stop ignoring people

Deathcas chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
I miss you too mate.

Anyway, this is an amazing, heartfelt poem. Though sometimes the beat is a little off, it doesn't matter, because the meaning is obvious.

It makes this cold-hearted fool feel sort of sad.
An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
The flow and rhymes were okay but sometimes there was a little bit of a stumble, but it was simple and sweet and heartfelt, so good job. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.
Twilidramon chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
That was nice, Ghost.

Loaño: Go see a therapist, mate.


... You have no respect for anything, do you?

Loaño: No I don't, and it's all your fault.
lymli chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
aw,it's true, it's hard to keep the friendship when they don't wanna.

great poem.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Oh a sad piece, but well written. Always be positive and keep writing!

~Anna~ _