Reviews for Goodbye |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It miiiiiiight help if you'd stop ignoring people Kthxbai |
![]() ![]() ![]() I miss you too mate. Anyway, this is an amazing, heartfelt poem. Though sometimes the beat is a little off, it doesn't matter, because the meaning is obvious. It makes this cold-hearted fool feel sort of sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The flow and rhymes were okay but sometimes there was a little bit of a stumble, but it was simple and sweet and heartfelt, so good job. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was nice, Ghost. Loaño: Go see a therapist, mate. SMACK! ... You have no respect for anything, do you? Loaño: No I don't, and it's all your fault. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw,it's true, it's hard to keep the friendship when they don't wanna. great poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh a sad piece, but well written. Always be positive and keep writing! ~Anna~ _ |