|Reviews for Sonnet IV|
| lipleaf chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I liked the rhyming in this poem. It flowed well and sounded natural, like it was supposed ti be there. It wasn't forced at all. I also liked the phrase "dry like desert rains." That made me think of isolation and seemed to sort of connect back to the "rarest rose" in the beginning. In the desert, where rain is rare, a flower would wither and die.
The last line, "An angel gone back to its sanctuary," sounded a bit off to me. It felt too long and didn't fit that well with the line before it. But other than that, nicely done. )
| das chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
if you were a guy i'd totally date you