Reviews for The Bubblegum Fairy and The Bad Boy
Love2read chapter 1 . 6/5
I love this oneshot. It's one of my favourite ones here. I keep coming back now and then to read it because it's so good. It's also very funny, specially the first half of it, with all the thoughts that are going through his head.. It had me laughing out loud the first couple of times I read it. All in all an amazing OneShot. Well done!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
Great Read! I actually like how cliche this is!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
amazing
ForrestHunt chapter 1 . 3/24/2014
My GOD that was amazing!
DragonOwl chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Awwwww! That was so sweet and entirely perfect! Not sure how realistic it is, but I love it even more because of that - it's almost like a fairy tale :D
Esther K. Binny chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
I don't know if I've reviewed this before - I think I might have. But hell, I'm reviewing again 'cause I'm that great, and I've also read this again.

I can't express my love for this one-shot. It's beautiful, and your structure, use of certain words, phrases, whatever is amazing. I'm sure you've heard this a lot, but if you do ever get the time and the inspiration, it would be wonderful to see this turned into something longer, and to see something more develop from Jake and 'Tinkerbell'!

Bravo on this snippet of beauty, bravo!

All the best,
Kim.
CaityLightning chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I love this, it was amazing! : ) honeslty though, it was astonishing. Absolutely incredible.
Cornerstone chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
I have to admit I was completely prepared to hate the male lead from the beginning. I did find myself rolling my eyes a bit at some of his inner thoughts but I actually really liked having a main insight on his thoughts. I also found myself relating to him a little more than the female character because she seemed a little more comfortable being who she was. She rocked her colorful clothing and seemed more outgoing while the male hid who he was. I related to him on that level.
shortwinters219 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
I absolutely love this!
Sheryl chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I cry everytime I read this and I've read this too many times to be considered healthy.

This is so amazingly written my heart flutters. I love it wasn't really clear that Annabel liked Jake so it made the ending a bit open. I love the characters and how impossibly sweet they are. I like Jake is such a marshmallow inside.

Sometimes I hope you make this into a full length story. I would love that to happen and I know that you're so great of an author that you'd be able to pull it off.

Love love love!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
AWESOME!
Kriss chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
Omg I love this so much I'm sad that you didn't add more.!
silvana94 chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
this was really cute, that is all i can say. i love the way you write your characters, even if they are cliche, you still manage to add something new to them, if that makes sense...
CameliaLisha chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I love it! That was way too cute for words! I love Jake, I love Annabel... I hate Trevor. Oh my gosh! This story is amazing! Kya!
asdfghuiop chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
that was cute & i loved it xxxx
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