That girl is so adorable...so innocent...and just wow...she is such a beautiful soul...I wish I had a crazy friend like that...although I have enough crazy friends...oops I digressed...anyways I'd like to see this as a longer story -xoxo

so wonderfully sweet...thank you for sharing...

This just might become my new favourite one shot on FP.
I loved the fact that you kept it real. You didn't give us the 'happily ever after' cliché and God, am I glad?
It was love.

Cheers!
:)

It's beautiful :')

D'aww! Adorable! Great job developing their characters

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

I love this oneshot. It's one of my favourite ones here. I keep coming back now and then to read it because it's so good. It's also very funny, specially the first half of it, with all the thoughts that are going through his head.. It had me laughing out loud the first couple of times I read it. All in all an amazing OneShot. Well done!

Great Read! I actually like how cliche this is!

amazing

My GOD that was amazing!

Awwwww! That was so sweet and entirely perfect! Not sure how realistic it is, but I love it even more because of that - it's almost like a fairy tale :D

I don't know if I've reviewed this before - I think I might have. But hell, I'm reviewing again 'cause I'm that great, and I've also read this again.

I can't express my love for this one-shot. It's beautiful, and your structure, use of certain words, phrases, whatever is amazing. I'm sure you've heard this a lot, but if you do ever get the time and the inspiration, it would be wonderful to see this turned into something longer, and to see something more develop from Jake and 'Tinkerbell'!

Bravo on this snippet of beauty, bravo!

All the best,
Kim.

I love this, it was amazing! : ) honeslty though, it was astonishing. Absolutely incredible.

I have to admit I was completely prepared to hate the male lead from the beginning. I did find myself rolling my eyes a bit at some of his inner thoughts but I actually really liked having a main insight on his thoughts. I also found myself relating to him a little more than the female character because she seemed a little more comfortable being who she was. She rocked her colorful clothing and seemed more outgoing while the male hid who he was. I related to him on that level.

I absolutely love this!