Reviews for The Bubblegum Fairy and The Bad Boy
Bluereve chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
I loved this. Excelent. Great.

Your main character feels so real...

Thank you really, it was a pleasure reading your story. Good luck and hope you keep improving!
LarunaBelle chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
Before my computer crashes on me: This is amazingly well written. You have their character depicted in a believable way.

And the writing style is strong.

Now! May you have many fruitful nights of writing.
theaddictedfighter chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
i thought this was a really good story. one of the few that i actually really liked. yeah, it was cliched, especially towards the end, but cliches are the nicest of the lot at times. :) and you made it original, kind of, what with annabel's unique voice. aw, jake. i love bad boys. especially ones with kind hearts for only one person. hehe. adorkable! keep up the awesome writing. :)

mands
PornNinja chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
I really enjoyed it! I didn't think it was overly sappy or anything like that. Just the right mix.

The way you write is just really easy to read as well. And I loved the characters, they were so interesting and you wrote them in a really believable way. So thanks for the story!
TammyS3 chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Aw, that was so good! I loved it!
BringAFriend chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
Oh you amaze me again. I think you have a thing for the bad boy. Tsk, tsk. You're good at kind of surprising me. Not just with this story, but even with your other, much longer one. I really think this was good. The way it progressed made it seem pretty light and natural. I enjoyed it very much. I also liked how the female character was so sweet and naive. Very nice, very sweet.
KittyKatLover chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Very cute little story.
HeARmeRaWR chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
Omg! That was so cute! I loved it! Very well done ]
MidorixGrl chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
aww, this was cute (:

I can see this as a.. longer story, but this will suffice (unless said author wants to continue, I as a reader, will not complain (; )
momo3069 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
Wow! This was realy good!
anitsirK chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
That was truly, truly fantastic. One of a kind. Just like how different "Tinkerbell" was. Hahaha. I love it. Keep writing. The ranting was kinda long, but it worked out-and it worked for the story. I love your characters. They're awesome. Hahaha. Very unique, lovable work. Thanks for putting this up. I sure hope you win. :)
helzyeah chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
that. is. the. CUTEST! oh its soo cutee! you should make this in to a full story!
TumbleWeed23 chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
:D
sunshinernnr chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
I'm bummed that you cut it short because you thought it got too sappy!

I thought you did a great job of progressing from annoyance to tolerance to friendship. I love that you subverted the bad boy stereotype for him and humanized the free spirit stereotype for her.

The ending was mildly disappointing, though. The whole story felt like it was leading up to a big resolution so it was a shock that it ended with him being content to be her first kiss and a friend. It's not a bad resolution, I just expected something more. Like for him to express hope in his life, or whatnot. Maybe that would be too cliched, but you're good at subverting cliches :-P.

I could definitely see this story being good in an expanded form as well (a novella or something) if you ever decided to go that route.
pinkguppie chapter 1 . 2/25/2010
Awesome story. I loved how you began the story, the way the characters interacted, and reacted to each other and how you ended it ... so in other words all of it :)

Amazing story keep up the great work.
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