|Reviews for A Lasting Storm|
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 16 . 8/11/2011
Aww poor Volt, being ignored and forgotten. [
Oh well, at least she finally made up with Bentley.
| Vaelynne chapter 16 . 8/11/2011
I have to say, i really dislike Bentley. I stopped liking him the first time he brought in the other supers. Don't like Cooper, he's a horses butt, Leda is an air head, and Leon... not much there is there? Though i feel bad for Adaline, i thought she was about the justice, not the fame. Though I do think she'd make an awesome super villainess )
| Tiffany chapter 16 . 8/11/2011
Hmm I do like the twist that Josh found out about her being Volt, but I dont know about Adaline's...personality. Not trying to be offensive or anything but I just dont...really like her anymore. It seems all her maturity from Bolt in the Blue has evaporated and turned her into this sniveling mess of a girl who is extremely childish and downright annoying. It's understandable but I don't know, I think she has lost all her appeal for me. The character that I loved in Bolt in the Blue is just not there anymore.
| SmashedIce.X chapter 16 . 8/11/2011
Hi! Good chapter, I love reading fight scenes! I love the song 'Defying Gravity' and I'm actually going to see Wicked in London next month which I'm so excited about.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter! :)
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
I KNEW he would figure it out! And he was sweet about it too. But of course Addie had to go hurt his feelings...poor Josh.
| Ultraviolet chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
:O Josh found out her secret? Wow, this is big. Very big. Can't wait to see how Blake reacts (Blake 3). Thanks for this, looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| SmashedIce.X chapter 15 . 8/10/2011
Ah, I wondered when Josh would figure the whole thing out! Something tells me that there could be a problem in the future with him knowing... :)
| Mysterious MD chapter 15 . 8/9/2011
That was another good chapter. It was well written, but I didn't encounter one possible spelling error. You had; "He popped up one night and made this cryptic comment about not trusting the one I'm closest too." where I think "too" should just be "to." Otherwise I didn't encounter anything. We see Josh acting differently, and I wonder if Leon's comment is directed at him. Then we have Adaline and Blake talking about everything going on, and ending with Josh and Adaline talking about how he now knows about everything. I look forward to reading more, keep up the good writing.
| Mysterious MD chapter 14 . 8/9/2011
That was a good chapter, it was well written. It definitely stirs up emotions of unfairness with all the hostility and fickleness of the citizens of the city. We see her upset after the intervention of the team and how she is worried that she may be replaced. I look forward to reading more, keep up the good writing.
| MarggiS chapter 14 . 8/8/2011
I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love this story! I love superheroes and yours are amazing!
You're one of my favorite authors on fictionpress!
| Ultraviolet chapter 14 . 8/3/2011
I really felt sorry for Adaline here, people have turned on Volt so quickly, it's hardly fair! Thanks for the chapters, really looking forward to the next one :)
| tangeritz chapter 14 . 8/3/2011
You updated so quickly! Thanks! :D Oh no! I think Josh found out(or will soon) that Adaline is Volt, not that Adaline didn't make it totally obvious (sarcasm). I really think that the citizens are annoying me the most. Every time I read about them, I start twitching. Anyways, I'm glad Leda's there. Great chapter! :) Can't wait for the next one.
By the way, you replied to my last review saying you would like a boyfriend like Josh, and I agree. Blake is cool with all the passion, but he seems so untrustworthy. Josh does seem like the perfect boyfriend. He does remind me of a dog, but in a good way. xD
| SmashedIce.X chapter 14 . 8/3/2011
Ooh, I wonder if Josh will guess who Adaline really is! Haha, I would get as annoyed as Adaline did about the mascot, after everything she's done for the city and they just turn their backs on her. It's pretty bad actually, looking at like that!
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 14 . 8/2/2011
Oh no Addie's revealing too much only because she's angry! Josh is totally catching on. /
YAY back to Blake in the next chapter! I've missed him. ]
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 13 . 8/2/2011
Hahaha I like how Coop gets his own little moment of glory there at the end. ]
Good thing they did step in though!