Reviews for A Lasting Storm
Mysterious MD chapter 9 . 9/19/2010
This story is great so far as a sequel. Your story is well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar mistakes in the past few chapters. Content wise, your story is very good as well. It's sad that everyone hates Volt now, the people are very fickle. However, I like how you portray Adaline, you keep true to her character, she doesn't change without reason. It's a very well written story, and I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the amazing writing!
Sinful Pleasures chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Thanks for the update

This story always manages to pull me into the tension, which is a good thing. I think it's because of Adaline's narrative voice, there's something about the way you write her character that makes me feel her emotions.

As of this chapter, I am now warming up to the idea of Leda as a friend to Adaline, but Cooper is becoming a bit of a mystery for me. I say this because I'm curious to know what he's really like (beyond his macho flirtatiousness) and how the next confrontation between him and Adaline will turn out.

Most importantly, however, I'm definitely looking forward to enjoying the tension of whatever you have planned next between Flyboy, Adaline, and her boyfriend.

Thank you once again and I look forward to your next update ;)
SmashedIce.X chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Great chapter! Leon still seems to be a bit of an enigma. Yay for being back in Shelton and seeing Blake in the next chapter! :)
Latindancer4ever chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Thanks for the update! I love the tension between Adeline and Cooper! It makes me laugh all the time. I also have a soft spot for Leon. How old is he again? He's such a sweetheart.
asianinvasion0530 chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Hmm that sucks that all those false accusations are being hurled at Addie.

And man...that Cooper. Haha.

But I'm excited for her to go back!
Lovelywik chapter 8 . 8/20/2010
I just realized that I have no clue about Coopers power... if you already said what it was, then I feel like a fail XD.

Anyways Can't wait for the next chapter. I always imagined Volts suit t be black, not yellow and red... I imagined more, Black and blue, Kinda Batmanish lol.
asianinvasion0530 chapter 8 . 8/7/2010
Cooper is a perverted jerk. I like Chameleon though, he's perceptive and it's funny how he always catches Adaline off guard. ]
asianinvasion0530 chapter 7 . 8/7/2010
Hahaha oh man. It sounds like interactions with the Australian guy are going to be...interesting. And Calandra sounds sweet.

But that sucks that Addie and Bentley aren't getting along so good now.
Julie G chapter 8 . 8/4/2010
Funny.I always imagined that the the Volt suit was blue!
Julie G chapter 7 . 8/4/2010
Urg! Bentley is being has every right to be mad!What a jerk!But I can't be mad at Calandra!

Also , that Leo kid talks of old fashioned
QuiteSavvy chapter 8 . 7/30/2010
Very Nice! I can't wait for an update!

by the way, the line,

"Don't think that because you know I'm not quite eighteen that you can go about hugging me like I'm some child," should be,

"Don't think that because you know I'm not quite eighteen, you can go about hugging me like I'm some child."

Sorry for being was kind of bugging me.

As always,

CLU3L355 chapter 8 . 7/28/2010
oh my gah :D

First of all, I have to say I LOVE your story. I completely feel torn between Josh and Blake too! Though I'm liking Blake and his british-ness a little more ;) Can't wait until Adaline is back in Shelton and theres more action ! And I totally agree with all others who have voiced concerns about Bentley; although I don't want to believe it, he does seem a tad suspicious.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter D !
Ultraviolet chapter 8 . 7/26/2010
I think the re-written ending of 7 is more Adaline, I prefer it! As for this chapter; Cooper is a bit weird, isn't he? What's up with him? And I thought the whole Officer Lewis/Volt/daughter scene was hilarious! :P

Leda scares me. I don't care how sweet she appears to be, her power is scary!

Looking forward to chapter 9! And I miss Blake :).
toaster unions chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
you're sucha tease with the almost calling Blake thing! c'mon i'm achin for some Blake(in).

i really liked the end of Ch. 7 much better! Addie definitely shows more strength that way.

i miss Blake! i keep fantasizing about something happening and him swooping down to save her. he's my hero
Sinful Pleasures chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
Another awesome chapter! I'm eager to find out why Cooper was sneering, could he have a thing for Adaline? I hope so (I love reverse harems - snicker snicker). And as nice and pretty as Leda is, I really want Volt to zap her a good one. She's too damn sweet and her power makes me agitated. I hate the thought of being helpless to someone else's will. But don't mind me, I just have issues. Anyways, thank you for the quick update!
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