Reviews for A Lasting Storm
Latindancer4ever chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
I really liked this chapter! Lewis is hilarious, especially when he talked about his daughter and Volt.

Question: Will Adaline ever reveal herself to the public? I'd love to see their reaction at the fact that she's a teenaged girl.

Update soon :)
SmashedIce.X chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
Leon sounds like an interesting character! I can't wait for the trial... :)
W0lfL0ver chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
Good, I am glad you changed the end of chapter 7 Addy is to head strong and stubborn to just accept what was going on and Bently manipulating her. Great update and I hope you update more soon. I want to see how the trial goes and I'm still pushing for Josh/Addy to break up... sooner than later hopefully but I'll be patient... ok so I'll probably bug you every single review for them to break up but well Feh you'll just have to deal with it until you do it!
pandorka42 chapter 8 . 7/25/2010
Ah, I'm glad she goes back to Shelton later. And that Flyboy's Super sentiments have rubbed off on her. :)

Julie G chapter 6 . 7/25/2010
she could have just told him she missed the city still.

and about the lighting bolts?Just tell him she had a kinda crush on volt.
Ultraviolet chapter 7 . 7/25/2010
I think I like Leon the best, because it's interesting to have a superhero who used to do illegal things in order to survive. And I, unlike Adaline, happen to like Robin Hood :P.

As for the others, Leda/Calandra's power scares me...she can basically have people do anything for her. And Australian dude I would like to learn mroe about :P.

I miss Blake though! I wonder if Adaline will tell Bentley about him...

Great update! Looking forward to the next.
SmashedIce.X chapter 7 . 7/24/2010
Interesting chapter, it was good to read abut the other Supers. Compelling compeller, that made me laugh! :)
toaster unions chapter 7 . 7/22/2010
I'm not so sure about the new characters, but Bentley is definitely starting to get on my nerves. I think he has selfish interests...

Especially with that comment about Adaline's parents... it's like he's trying to turn her against her own parents in favor of him. And he doesn't want her to get close to anyone who isn't himself or isn't in his control.

I hope Flyboy knocks some sense into Adaline ;)

Thank you thank you thank you for the update!
pandorka42 chapter 7 . 7/22/2010
So I'm liking these newbies. But, honestly, the whole time I was reading this chapter, I kept hoping (at a later date) Adaline would call up Flyboy and force him to join them so she doesn't feel so...well...alienated, I suppose. But her pride is much too big for that, I think. :P

Unless she twists it around in her head to make it possible...

But, whatever.

Good chapter! I like the powers, I'm undecided about Bentley (I'm all team Addy), and I think you should continue as you are! Brilliant. Thanks much for updating. :)

Sinful Pleasures chapter 7 . 7/22/2010
Ooh, new team mates, how exciting! I'm glad to hear that your outlining/writing is going well. I'm interested in seeing what's going to happen next!
Lovelywik chapter 7 . 7/21/2010
I loved the part with Cooper, that was hilarious. I'm Sad now that I have to wait for an update D: lol anyways I encourage you to write XD

I wonder if Addie will invite Blake to be part of the Crew... that would be cool.
Lovelywik chapter 4 . 7/21/2010
:D I love blake in this XD
Lovelywik chapter 3 . 7/21/2010
LMAO I knew that was gonna happen XD

That always happens for some reason... maybe its a cliche, probably is. Well it is Addies fault ofr going in. :D
Lovelywik chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I like this chapter :)
MusicJunkie4 chapter 7 . 7/21/2010
My gosh, I was just about to review to chapter 6 when BAM! Chapter 7 comes out! It has been so long since you've updated and then all of the sudden, there are two! Wow, keep it up, yeah? ;)

You know, I can totally understand Adaline's point of view in this one. For someone that you trust so much to go behind your back, even if they are doing what they think is best for you... that is definatly pretty hard. Gr, Bentley! Think man, think! You could have at least told her! Or did you, and I've just forgotten about it? (it did seem like I was having deja vu during this chapter... why is that, hm?)

I love all of the other super's names. I laughed so hard with The Dominator, thought it was pretty cool with Chameleon/ Leon (random-ever listened to Kings of Leon? I love that band, haha), loved the Calandra lark, and I laughed my head off at The Sparkler. Adaline is totally right-no one would have taken her (him?) seriously if that would have been her (his?) super name, haha. I know I wouldn't have!

That last paragraph is also very true, with the past thing. If only Addie would follow it, yeah?

Now you must update, so I can review more! hahaha, MJ4
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