|Reviews for A Lasting Storm|
| Ultraviolet chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Just re-read everything you've posted so far. I'm avoiding revision, you see :P. Still hoping Blake will dump Kat (same with Addie and Josh :P). Hope you can update soon :).
| Julie G chapter 5 . 5/15/2010
i cnt wait 4 wen she tells her momshe's volt!also,is she evr goin 2 tell kelsey she volt?
| Julie G chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
kelsy is betr secrets then we thot!
| Julie G chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
tahts wut she gets from Bin 2 nosy!also ,i realised a logic error 4 the the fair n blake n addy r foprced togo on the ferris wheel but blake is fraid of heights?he's flyboy!he flies!
| Julie G chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
i hav chores 2 do,but here i am,gobblying up the sequal!
| biochemical chapter 5 . 5/6/2010
Love it, and I look forward to the next update! )
| JWood chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
I LOVE THIS!
| HeartsOfDiamonds chapter 5 . 4/8/2010
I like the story so far. I wish Addie would just break up with Josh and Blake broke up with Kat and get together. I can just feel the sexual tension. :) Great job. Update soon.
| MusicJunkie4 chapter 5 . 4/8/2010
Hello! Something must have happened, because I noticed that my last review I sent in for this one didn't go through. . SO, here I am to write you a new one, as I have sorely been lacking lately:
I loved how you tied in the love for Shakespear in this fic. It was really great how they had to read Shakespear's stuff, and Blake was all confused if she meant it or not. Though, really, he shouldn't have thought so (even though she did) because it was an assignment. The feeling behind her reading it though was probably very much there, haha.
Ahh, poor Kat. I don't like her, but no one deserves being lead on... same with Josh, really. I mean, cummon Addie! It is very clear that you really like Flyboy (if not Blake), so you shouldn't drag Josh on. If anything, if you are not sure, then you should tell them both that you want to be friends and see what happens from there! Though I am a bit mad at Josh for what he did in this fic and the last one about her telling him that she was going to The City, he doesn't deserve this. He is much to sweet for any of it.
And, Addie, it was very mean that you started making out with Josh infront of Blake. Although you two are friends now, you know that he still likes you very much and that really hurt him. Go apologize woman!
Ah... I really liked how Kelsey tried to get them back together, and how Addies mom gave her all of the friendly motherly advice. That should show Addie that she can trust her mom. I can, though, understand her hesitance with not telling her dad. He is kinda a meanie butt, to put it lightly.
Now, get on writing so that I can review again! I promise I will much more speadily!
| ponponcake chapter 5 . 3/22/2010
omg omg omgomgomg i freaking love this story x_x the only thing I dont get is why Blake won't break up with Kat (that bitch :D). If he did then he would have a way better chance with Addie...anyways, hope you update soon! I'm seriously in love with the plot :)
| Travish chapter 5 . 3/9/2010
Gosh! I beg you to write more! I'm a BFTB addict! I could almost feel the electricity between Addie and Blake..
| KT-ImmortalIncarnate chapter 5 . 3/8/2010
Ah, the wonderful essence of what's going to end up going horribly wrong! I just love it when these kinds of things happen, they either end tragically, or happily. I've never seen a story that does this kind of thing end any other way... mellowly! I don't think that's a word, but anyway.
Good work, I really like how it's going. Flyboy is one of my favorite characters, and Addie is quite dynamic.
| SmashedIce.X chapter 5 . 3/8/2010
Great chapter, this story always seems to make me laugh! I also LOVE The Taming of The Shrew! :)
| Daphne.Claire chapter 5 . 3/8/2010
i love josh and everything but addie really needs to dump him, not to be callous.
he just doesnt have the smae connection addie has with flyboy and over anythinbg else he just deserves better. if addie really cared enough she would realise that while she is not cheating with flyboy with her lips she is doing it emotionally.
i dont noe i just do not sense a happy ending any thime soon with these characters if
1. addie doesnt breakup with josh
2. if addie goes to the big city
3. addie doesnt get with flyboy
| Ultraviolet chapter 5 . 3/8/2010
Ooh, I wonder how Addie's mother will react? And they've agreed to just be friends? Well, maybe for now. But sooner or later they're going to have to dump Kat and Josh (what an odd pairing they could be) and fly off into the sunset...:p.
Can't wait for the going-back-to-the-City chapter! Thanks for updating.