Reviews for Insatiable: Break
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 14 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"I have been reborn

and I want you to fix the damage.

I wrap my arms around your shoulders."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 13 . 1/16/2010
Love it!
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 12 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"Both girls are broken

and wish they could

fix the other."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 11 . 1/16/2010
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Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 10 . 1/16/2010
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Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 9 . 1/16/2010
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"I hear the thump

of your frantic heartbeat

and your scent fills me up,

it's comforting and

I close my eyes."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 8 . 1/16/2010
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Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 7 . 1/16/2010
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"So simple to light the sulphur match

and set me ablaze.

I burn. Burn. Burn for you.

Walk away as I slowly

suffocate on the fumes of smoke."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 6 . 1/16/2010
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"Lips swollen still from your kiss

neck marked with your love bruises

the sign of your ownership,

and my body still flushed pink with desire."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 5 . 1/16/2010
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"You lusted after a part of me

and I can never have it back,

you left your mark on me.

All see how damaged I am."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 1/16/2010
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"I hear her cruel cackle

of laughter from far above

as she voyeurs the vultures that

pick at my skin."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 1/16/2010
Grear!

"Bridal-style

you lifted me

and took flight,

dove wings caressed the sky."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"Her love is sugared cyanide

which I gulped greedily."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
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