Reviews for Sleepless Slumber
bouttellom chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
this is a funny poem to read when you just woke up from a nap. i loved really good words :)
sw13 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Well this is deffinatly true for me. Love hates me...so dreams are about all i got. Good poem.
AwesomeEyes chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Wow, that was really good! I wish that I could write poems like this. your really good!

Eyes!
perverted.intellectual chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
The way it ends I feel like just taking the advice on face value. It seems so easy just to shut your eyes against reality and create a perfect world with a perfect love. Though re-reading it, it's very physically orientated: her hair instead of her laughing for example. She touchs without definated emotion which gives her a very dream-like quality.

Fav lines:

in your deep unknown slumber

you stroke her hair

every invisible strand slipping

from the patterns of your imagination