Reviews for The Two Of Them
I'm lost in stereo chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
I had to admit that your stories are pretty good. This one made me cry, but I loved it. :')
GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
This seems to be another “different” genre stories of yours, which I’m rather fond of, because you’re really good at investigating with relationships, not only romantic, between two or more characters.

They tend to be more realistic as well.

You’ve drawn out the beginning very skilfully, telling a whole lotta story in very little words. It kind of conjures up a stark atmosphere as well.

The time skip is tear-inducing….I really, really don’t want to think what happens next, cause I’m kind of still wishing for a happy ending, you know?

…Which reading on, is definitely not going to come

“The two of them” – that phrase just….aw shucks….it’s very emotional, very powerful, very heartbreaking to some extent.

“But not any longer.”

Very powerful oneshot.
perverted.intellectual chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Wow. That was a really simple story: simple language, simple construction. But it was so powerful it made me tear up.