Reviews for Just Smile and Nod |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good i like the way you write ;D please please please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I can't wait to see where you take it next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it so far, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story, keep the good work and update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't been in FP in ages and tonight, I decided I want to read something that would make me believe again. I chose your story and guess what, it did not disappoint. I'm hoping you'll update soon. xx Jess |
![]() ![]() looks like itll be really good! if you need someone to review for you just reply at the end of the next chapter. thanks for the read! x |
![]() ![]() This is good, can't wait til next ch! Hurry up. P.S I know a song with the name Welcome to my life. Good song : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this prolog its amazing but there were two small grammer typos i don't know if you want to know that or not some authors like that please update soon! i cant wait for more! hope everythings going well for you -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Great story line! I love drawing too! YAYY I cannot wait till the next chapter! KAITLYN |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This sounds really really really really really really good! _ keep going :D Is there anything in particular you would like me to comment on? I'm planning on following this story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. Just check the spelling and other typos. Other than that I like it. I've been to a high school exactly like that so I think your depiction is marvelous. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the sound of this. You have a promising prologue that makes me want to read more and I like the touch of adding gossip about the other students; You get a feel for the school and what it's students are like and you can tell that she is very observant and kind of invisisble? In the sense that she does not seem to belong to any of the cliched groups she mentioned. You had a few minor grammatical errors such as: 'My hair had tumbled off my shoulder and it lied on the edges of my paper' It should be 'lay' not 'lied.' And possibly change 'edges' to 'edge,' the singular use seems to make more sense to me... But otherwise, good job and I can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SOunds interesting so far. Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() Hey! I like the idea of this story, and this chapter was pretty good (: Hope you can give us more info about the main character herself in the next chapter... Keep up the good work! |