|Reviews for Out of Time|
| Abhyank chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
"Please don't hate me for what I do
But if you must, on you I'll accuse no blame
Because in the end I had to hurt you...
I'm sorry that you ever heard my name.
But I know that you'll be happier that
You can live your life to its prime
And hopefully soon you'll forget this spat
And simply know I ran out of time."
hey it was really a nice array of emotes which constituted and explained every para on its own :)
but last 2 para seemed to contradict each other..coz u know she cant live happier without u..even then u make her feel free by making her feel guilty that you will not blame her if she blames u..:)
but overall this poem was nice