Reviews for Battlefield |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Omg this was absolutely awesome! I loove it so much *-* The plot, the characters (If Gerard could just appear right now my life would be perfect, because he's perfecf of course). However, after "The Games" I believe that you could elaborate a bit. I felt like it was kind of rushed, as it could be more detailed, like their feelings, the battle scenes. I just felt like the days passed too fast. But amazing job anyway, i couldn get enough of it! |
![]() ![]() Holyfuck, do you know how selfish you are? One of the rules on this site is that non-story content cannot be uploaded in a separate chapter. You know why? Because people like you take advantage of it. All other stories are swamped by your work now, and why? Because you are a selfish cunt who wants to promote her own stuff? You're not only disappointing those seeking something new to read, you're also disappointing your readers who were expecting a new chapter. You, darling, are disgusting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Gerard based on Gerard butler? :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love action romance stories, their epic. Thanks for the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Firstly, its sad that you're no longer on this site. Reading your stories are very enjoyable and I read quite a few in the last couple of days. I'm sorry for not having reviewed. I'm still not sure if you'd even see this, seeing as how you may not be checking your email for reviews anyway. I must say that Gerard was one of your beat heroes along with Chris in saving smiles. Paul didn't really get to me too deeply in killing by captivation. Anyway. This really was quite a story.. just wanted to say I loved it!. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I'm very intrigued. Can't wait to see if she trashes him... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love. This! You're an amazing writer! This story reminds me of the Hunger Games, which I can't wait to see in theaters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished rereading this story for the third time and I can tell you honestly that this story is amazing! I love sci fi! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this. I thought that the whole 'what is it that makes us human?' idea was really interesting. I love how you managed to mix sci-fi and romance - shows how good you are at writing. The characters were awesomely kick-ass. Not to mention that your writing was practically flawless. So yeah, I loved it so much so that I had to read it all in one sitting. -E |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was sooo cool and original! I absolutely loved it! Please continue writing such awesome stories:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story, I read it in one go and then read it again just because I wanted more. The characters are real and you can't help but cheer them on. The plot is solid and not rushed but well paced. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor Dillinger. I think it's nice that you're able to incorporate your different characters into your stories. :) This is a very nice ending. 3 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmmmm... |