|Reviews for RIP You're Dead To Me|
| in theory chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
The rhythm of most of this is really good, it kinda bounces along. But the stanzas:
"Im supposed to be mourning
But it’s early in the morning
And I’ve got meetings with clients
Who, unlike you, are reliable" have a rougher rhythm, it kinda broke my concentration(is that the right word? I think I mean absorption but that seems even less apt.).
| Angela Nichole chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This is very unique! It's not my type of lyrics, but I enjoyed reading through it!
Angela Nichole :)