|Reviews for Fantasy Cafe|
| Drama Chickadee chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
It all happens in a coffee shop! ;)
Love the story (apart from a few gramatical errors). Without expressing so, you can imagine the looks on their faces at every turn.
| yeahwrite chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
Wow... its ..really nice...
bdw..thnx for d review. I'm new here so i really don't now how it works in here. And don't be sad abt Jerusha...things are gonna get VERY interestin!
By the author of story-"Party at Jerusha's place"
| Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
I really like this! Amazing how we can feel so dull and unimportant on the inside and be so brave and full of glamor on the outside. I love the way you find the color in a shabby world!
This review is by the author of "The Charity Chronicles!"
| Jwan chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
An exquisite first story of luv
| firefly114 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Not bad for a first story on FP! I look forward to reading more!
| oxreturntosenderxo chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Good start to your story. The first chapter is quite interesting. The only thing I noticed were a few grammar mistakes and spelling errors. But apart from that it was nice.
Looking forward to reading more!
Oh, and thanks for the review by the way!