LOL

Im amused and reading the rest.

That was an amazing story every inch of it please write more!

I enjoyed this story. I loved the voice of each character. Dr. Fisher hitting on his "Angel" was hysterical. I thought the doctor was interested because she had detected that "Angel" had a malady. Is this the end of the story?

This was a good chapter.

I enjoyed this chapter. Every chapter has made me laugh. The sex scene was okay. The foreplay was fine but the main event was almost nonexistent. What happened in the morning? Did Malcolm have an orgasm?

They seem like normal little kids but she does not have the patience for them and their antics. This dude has nerve!

I enjoyed the humor in this chapter.

i don't know what I feel about this anymore it's different from what I thought, they haven't spent any time knowing each other, but all they do is have sex if they aren't with the children, it seems more like lust than love to here

This is a great story but I wished it was more emotional, it seems all he wants from her is sex and I don't believe you can find love through sex.

but the story is funny.

The love scene was fine, not smutty or hardcore, just perfect. If it was too explicit it would take away from the romance.

Though I do love this, I kind of thought they moved really fast to the sex, they hadn't even been on their date yet.

She was so strong before now she is allowing him to control her every move.

I can't tell you how much i love her spunk, it is so refreshing to read about a female who isn't swayed by her hormones or go all weird because of a man's looks.

This is very funny!

Though his thoughts about his sister in law was a little off putting, I enjoyed the chapter. He is a grown child isn't he?

I love her spunk, this had me cracking up

I can understand why u would have a writer's block... since Malcolm was able to get Theresa so fast, which was their biggest obstacle the new question is, what now? Or at least that's how it feels, it feels like the story is losing direction. But I really love Malcolm, he's very unpredictable.

Oh and I have a question: what does Theresa really look like? At first u said she had shoulder length twists, then u said she had short straight hair, and now she has curly hair. I'm sorry it's just that everytime I get a solid visual of her u change