Reviews for Umbrella
BleedingInLove chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
BleedingInLove chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Im amused and reading the rest.
Angela chapter 17 . 7/24/2013
That was an amazing story every inch of it please write more!
JFJD chapter 17 . 6/30/2013
I enjoyed this story. I loved the voice of each character. Dr. Fisher hitting on his "Angel" was hysterical. I thought the doctor was interested because she had detected that "Angel" had a malady. Is this the end of the story?
JFJD chapter 15 . 6/30/2013
This was a good chapter.
JFJD chapter 14 . 6/30/2013
I enjoyed this chapter. Every chapter has made me laugh. The sex scene was okay. The foreplay was fine but the main event was almost nonexistent. What happened in the morning? Did Malcolm have an orgasm?
JFJD chapter 8 . 6/30/2013
They seem like normal little kids but she does not have the patience for them and their antics. This dude has nerve!
JFJD chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I enjoyed the humor in this chapter.
golden62 chapter 17 . 9/19/2011
i don't know what I feel about this anymore it's different from what I thought, they haven't spent any time knowing each other, but all they do is have sex if they aren't with the children, it seems more like lust than love to here
golden62 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
This is a great story but I wished it was more emotional, it seems all he wants from her is sex and I don't believe you can find love through sex.

but the story is funny.
golden62 chapter 14 . 9/19/2011
The love scene was fine, not smutty or hardcore, just perfect. If it was too explicit it would take away from the romance.

Though I do love this, I kind of thought they moved really fast to the sex, they hadn't even been on their date yet.

She was so strong before now she is allowing him to control her every move.
golden62 chapter 6 . 9/19/2011
I can't tell you how much i love her spunk, it is so refreshing to read about a female who isn't swayed by her hormones or go all weird because of a man's looks.

This is very funny!
golden62 chapter 4 . 9/19/2011
Though his thoughts about his sister in law was a little off putting, I enjoyed the chapter. He is a grown child isn't he?
golden62 chapter 2 . 9/19/2011
I love her spunk, this had me cracking up
wonderland212 chapter 13 . 8/29/2011
I can understand why u would have a writer's block... since Malcolm was able to get Theresa so fast, which was their biggest obstacle the new question is, what now? Or at least that's how it feels, it feels like the story is losing direction. But I really love Malcolm, he's very unpredictable.

Oh and I have a question: what does Theresa really look like? At first u said she had shoulder length twists, then u said she had short straight hair, and now she has curly hair. I'm sorry it's just that everytime I get a solid visual of her u change
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