Reviews for Mephisto
3M2R chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
The inner battle to stay sane. How true!

We don't need to look forward, we just have to learn not to look backwards.
Aida Rose chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
Mephisto...he's a demon of greed? All I know is that he tempted Faust...From the beginning, I got the idea of a mugger. That's probably not what you meant, but I had this overwhelming feeling this had something to do with greed? So, yeah.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
beautifully written (i think i've said that like a dozen times but it's true)

fave lines:

"Stumble, gut our organs

Pierce the flesh, & bleed us out

Drop by drop, drop by drop

Every penny counts,

Ain't that so, Mephisto?"
Airlia Alala chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
A good piece of writing. I like the atmosphere created here and the vivid images created through the descriptive language. My particular fave was the line 'Your claws reach further than the Southern sea/Talons ripping; shredding the webs of our peaceful sleep/You Savage Beast'. Such vivid images! Keep up the good writing!