Reviews for Insatiable: Control
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 5 . 1/16/2010
Love it!

"Your fingertips caress my neck

with the lightest touch causing goosebumps

to rise in their wake."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 4 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"We have become one entity now.

I break away from your neck

to offer my wrist to you, gasping,"
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 3 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"The bloodlust rises inside

that cannot be slaked by reason.

I battle the urge to bite you

and imprint my mark on your

flawless skin."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Love it!

"Your blood runs through

the chambers of the

heart you gave me,

as it works its way now

through my system."
Phoebe Melinda Halliwell chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Great!

"Did you fry it to have for supper?

Did you throw it away

since you discovered it to be worthless?"
FelleLLoyd chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Beautiful & Sad. Love the imagery.