|Reviews for A Modest Proposal|
| Meggie chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Let me guess: you got an A. You would deserve it. This is wonderful! The span of your consideration of the problem, the careful phrasing... it's a VERY compact, tight little inferno of an essay-your teacher was probably blown away.
Your 'walking culture' idea is very interesting-not the idea that we should walk more, while that is really a good idea-more, the way you presented it as a culture shift, and I think that says a lot about your view on the severity of the problem: only very serious issues require life changes, and I like how you stated that as part and parcel with saving our environment.
Actually, my dad is in the process (in the process, as in, I was one of the first to test-drive it :D) of making a car that would basically, to dumb it down to what I understand, run on water. It's very cool. I could email a copy of the invention blog he's making, if you're interested.
Awesome last sentence :D
| Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I'm gonna be brief in my comment: I LOVED IT