Reviews for Forbidden
sunnybunny17 chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Hey! You've reviewed like all my stories, so I thought I'd swing by(: well if you wanted it vague, congrats, you pass(; makes me really want to read more, so get on out, and update, update, update!

~Brooke
13.l.o.v.e.13 chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
I luv it!
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Looks interesting. The absence of description (of both characters and setting) made it feel a little lacking, overall, and harder to get into the story. It also seemed like you just skipped over her meeting Aaron, as if it wasn't important, although according to the summary he's going to be playing a bigger part in the story later on.

I like what you have so far. I'm super curious as to how the mystery aspect will work its way into your story. Then again, these characters are only seventh graders, so they're what? Twelve? Thirteen? That seems a bit too young for romance. Or serious romance, at least.

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of this. It definitely has potential. Keep up the good work.

- Koki