I like it. :D I shall read more of your stories. Assuming you have more. Hahahahaha!

Not so realistic...

but real cute.

Zomg so very fluffy and adorabubble ! Lovee itt

Adorable story. I love that you didn't make stereotypical hs characters.

so totally cute. Love it so much!

just a little suggestion - maybe you could stretch it out when he says he wants to break up with her? Like not have them make up immediately? I think that would build the climax a little!

Ri

that was short and sweet but perfectly so. :) thanks!

They're so cute!

“What’s up?” he asks a bit nervously.

Shakily, I take a deep breath. “What I wanted to-“

“I want to break up.” Blaine says quickly with little conviction.

Snapping my head up to met his confused face, “What?”

“What?” He asks looking at my shocked tone.

“Why are you breaking up with me?” I ask quickly.

Well shit. This is embarrassing. Here I was, about to tell him that I love him and the idiot wants to break up with me. Great timing Vanessa.

“Because I thought you were going to break up with me!” He says frantically.

“Where the hell did you get that? I wasn’t going to break up with you…”

“You weren’t?” Shaking my head, a look of relief fills his face. “Oh. Well I take that back then.” He says with a big smile. “So what is it you wanted to say to me?”

I love that part!)It's so cute!

aw that was soo sweet