|Reviews for I WAS Only Famous Outside of the US|
| Lissya chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
This is a pretty decent story but some of the wording seems a bit... off. I'm not sure how to explain it but some of the passages seem a bit awkward. As for the french, most of the translations are unfortunately off. I'm a French native speaker (and yet have gone to American school all my life) so don't hesitate to PM me or email me (email is on my profile) if you want any sort of help with those. To work the translations into the text more smoothly, what I suggest is that you incorporate the details of what the characters said into Damien's thoughts and reactions. Other than that... I think its pretty good and the plot line seems relatively focused and well off to a good start. Should you be in need of a beta, I exist and love doing that sort of work!
| Anthony Tesla chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
I LOVED IT! XD I like the idea, the concept is very well handled, and while the topic seems a little formulatic, you made it work.