nice...

they're opening up :D

great job

lovelovelove it! its amazing!

Glad you remember! I'm loving the story! she's pissin' me off, but still love it! haha can'tbelieve she ran away! :0 It's such a shame you removed the other story, was actually quite an enjoyable story to read.. update soon!

WTF! NO! ADDY!

gr.

yeah! thatll make him know u care! gr

they kissed but she ran away...oh no..

update soon..

Woah great story you have on here so far! :] Update soon please

iiPurple

Aww! Poor Nate! I'm so glad they had their first "kiss". And this is definetely some progress ;)

I can't believe she ran away! How could she leave Nathan alone? Once she finally realised that she had some sort of feelings for him she runs away.

Anyways... Please update ASAP! Can't wait for more )

good one :)

another great chapter :D

*Gasp*

AH!

SO WONDERFUL! I LOVED IT!

She finally admited that she cared about him! And he was so sad and she did something really nice...

AND THEY KISSED! Hooray!

I love this! Your story is so wonderful. I am just breathless. I really cannot wait for the rest of the story and to see what kind of messes these two get into together!

Aw...I was crying during chapter 9! Its so sad that she has to go through it and sweet how Nathen was there for her :)

Yay! That was a perfect first kiss, except for the whole fall on your butt and run for it thing, lol. Otherwise, it went pretty well. I was glad to see him opening up to her and revealing such intimate information about his past. Not to mention a confession about caring for each other, awesome. I feel so sad about his what happened to his sister, at least he shared it with her so now she knows and they can maybe attempt to be closer. It's a fist step in the right direction, now if we could just get her to not run away. ;) I really enjoyed that chapter, so good. Keep 'em coming!

Hey.

Slow it down.

"What do you want from me?""What do you want from me?"

Hahahaha. I really dont know why that line made me laugh so much, but as soon as I read it I started singing that song...yup. Because I'm uber cool.

Ooh. I'm really loving this. Nathan's funny, he's rather perverted really, but that's great.

Off to read more. I know this is a pretty pathetic review, but i'll leave a longer one once there's more that I feel like I need to say :D

Me? Awesome? Nah, you're awesomer. :)

I just got out of work, I'm smelling like ice cream, and I seriously need a shower, but I saw this in my inbox, thought, "Hm..."

YEAH!

Ah, yes, the treasured moment that we've all be waiting for, and she runs away.

Nice.

I like how she just suddenly kissed him back. It made me all happy inside. xD

The thing with his sister seems a tad melodramatic, but I think it fits the situtation well. I found myslelf believing him...which is the whole point of writing, right?

Anyway, killer update.

- KatherineJames