Reviews for Boundless
Personality Differs chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
I was actually hoping that it wouldn't be striaght away. I love how you are setting out the relationships. I can't wait for more.

Love Rhee.
HoodedStellaish chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
This story is amazing! I love that he's such a dick to her but he secretly loves her. It's so secret that *he* doesn't know it. Men, huh? Hah.

For the most part I didn't find ANY grammar problems or sentence problems. Amazing job at editing or whatever you do.

Stella
justice chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Okay so I just read the first chapter but I can already tell you that I honestly like this story.

I like that the main character isn't the picture perfect girl that appears in most stories...

And now I'm gonna read the next chapters...
Anise Cary chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
She hoped that he would simply come home, see it, and sign it without any commotion or second thoughts. - While on one hand I wanna say this is the chicken's way out, in Addison's situation (I keep wanting to call her Addie btw) it's probably the best choice, bc if she forged his siggy and he found out I don't even want to think about what he'd say. her dad needs some serious mental help.

But she knew in the back of her mind that she would have doubtlessly put more effort into getting ready if she had actually been looking forward to going on the date; if it had been with someone she had developed proper feelings for, prior to it. - hm so would she put in more effort for Nathan if he actually asked her on a date nicely?

but that wasn't noticeable unless someone really knew Addison inside out. - you mean like Nathan ;)

Addison jerked open the door of Kevin's car and shuffled around the junk on the floor - oh nice he doesn't even clean out the car for the date, yep that would be it for me

They hardly even spoke before and he wanted to hold hands already? - um YEAH, that's a little odd

Kevin had already walked a good distance halfway to the restaurant. - oh HELL NO! boy needs to get a clue

"You're so pretty. How can I let you go?" - *puke*

until she decided that he hadn't proved himself to be that bad of a guy, after all. - really? she has her standards set to low

But she didn't care suddenly that he wasn't ever home, she was just happy that she could start building up the foundation to her dream. - cheering for her, this is wonderful

and especially not around Addison after what Damien had told him. - uh uh not fair I wanna know what he knows dang it

All he cared about was the flicker of Addison's smile replaying over and over again in his mind. - aw, that's so sweet and he's so not gonna know what to do with it

awesome chapter
Midnight113 chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
You know, that date did go pretty well considering. I don't trust the guy though, he's giving me a bad vibe. I don't know what it is but it didn't help that the waitress mentioned his other dates, lol. I wouldn't have agreed to another date with him but that's just me. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. Loved the end too, looks like they're really getting along, for now. ;) Update asap!
Buddie24688 chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
Hehe... But, I was actually able to review! I ususally just read and remember, so know that I'm still reading, whether you hear from me or not!

The part were Addison and Kevin go on a date, I'm like, "Does this guy know anything?"

So far, I do not like Kevin. :P
Anise Cary chapter 7 . 3/15/2010
Addison didn't quite know what to make of her decision just yet. Kevin wasn't a bad guy, as she had deducted from their previous encounters, but she didn't really feel the compelling attraction to him. - silly girl is thinking bc she's not wildly attracted to him, he's a safe date. She won't be tempted to do all the things her father accuses her of doing.

She was using him in a way, and she felt like a complete bitch. - she's being too hard on herself

Relationships scared, no - terrified her in a way. - no surprise considering her relationship with her dad, and her previous relationship

She would go through hell and back if it meant not having to work at the hotel. - I can understand her attitude her considering the questions she's asking herself, and it sucks to give up your dream but I wonder if she'll ever find the nerve to stand up to her dad, or if she's ever gone to the hotel with him to see what he does, to see if she'd even be interested. Has she asked him anything? Shown interest at all? Probably not right? I mean considering the way her dad treats her.

He stopped in his tracks and neared closer to her with a stern stare. "Addison, if you're going to speak to me like that, you can get out of this house immediately." - I wonder what he'd do if she packed up and left? Would he regret it? or would he say it's what he'd always expected?

You know that you're going to work at the hotel when you graduate from business school." - what's he going to do if she doesn't? I mean once she's an adult with a college degree what can he do?

Nothing can make you any worse than you already are. - someone should report this man for emotional/verbal abuse

She didn't really want to ask her father for anything more, but it seemed that she didn't have a choice. - she already has as much permission as she's going to get from him, doesn't the girl know how to forge or copy dad's siggy? Why risk his changing his mind?

I saw your house when I was taking a walk so I decided to pay your pretty face a visit. - not a bad answer coming from his smart mouth LOL

You're really sexy when you're mad. - *groan* dumb boy, doesn't he know that's like the oldest line in the book

"Addison, what I told you about Kevin…I'm not-" he paused and ran a hand through his raven hair. "Just…just be careful with him." - aw he's worried about her, me thinks perchance he's going to find out where it is and be there. I hope so bc I have a bad, bad feeling about this date and it's ending.

Did she really need to worry? - Good he's got her thinking, that'll keep her on her guard

looking forward to where this is going, well that and worried about what will happen with Kevin and what her dad might think or say
violet-eyez chapter 7 . 3/15/2010
aww so sweet he is worried about her
Personality Differs chapter 7 . 3/14/2010
Aha. Yep. That makes sense. I am glad she knows what she wants to do even if it is against her fathers wishes. And the date with Kevin. I hope that goes massively bad just to prove Nathan correct. I can't wait for your next chapter.

Love Rhee.
Midnight113 chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
Awesome work, I loved it. Her father is so awful to her though, I wish he didn't treat her that way. At least he's letting her take art classes, hopefully. ;) I think Nathan is probably my favorite character. He's just so... Nathan, if that makes sense, lol. Seriously, great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Smile it's Friday chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
Great story! Addison and Nathan are soo meant to be together.(:
11cina24 chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
Hahaha, thank you! Geeze, Addison has a few problems...lol, its all good though..Anyway, I want to see how that date she's going on with Kevin is going to turn out! Oh, I'd like to see Nathan at the same place where her date is, but she ends up ditching her date and going somewhere with Nathan! That would be super duper cool, ;P..I REALLY thought that this chapter would be about the date, but that's what I'm on your alert list for! So hurry erry up and type that next chapter chicca! (:
Floppy125 chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
I hope her date goes wrong so Nathan can save her... hahahha...

please update as soon as you can! the story is going on great )
kiss-n-tell chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
I defiantly like Nathan. I can tell that he really cares for Addison, but he just expresses it through perverteness.

I really love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Buddie24688 chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
Uh-mazing! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, too many activities! Well, you're writing, is flawless. I feel like reading it over again! Which is rare, unless I'm practically in love with the book.

I have to say, I'm suprised "Addie" has controlled herself for this long!

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Write soon!
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