Ok I realized today I hadn't caught up with Addison and Nathan yet. I'm loving this story. I'm so intrigued by Nathan, his attraction to Addison and his attitude towards life in general. I feel for Addison and her home life. You have me hooked, I want to know where this is going. I want to know if they end up together, if Addison finally tells off her dad, makes him see what he's doing to her. Keep it up.

HAHAHA!

I love Nathan's POV! Generally, I love all the POVs from theo boys' minds so...

Anyways... please update ASAP!

I love the story so please UPDATE!

Cool story, I find their relationship extreamly amusing and he's such an ass, lol. I love it. I'm very anxious for more, update soon!

ROFL!

hahaha, Nathan's POV is hilarious...whats his big secret!

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Tee

oh, the wonders these two can do ] (and yes, i think nathan is sexi-in my mind-so you better find a sexi ass guy for him!)

ouch! i would've slapped him and then run out of the house like crazy (he scares me). ohh, how i love our wonderful couple ]

AHAHAH! I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS TOO FUNNY!

I am a fan of yours for life!

I freaking love this story!

Write more,k? :)

MOAR! :D

its awesome (:

YELLOWYELLOHIHELLO!

Aw, Nathan is such an ass. A freaking adorable ass at that. I can't help but want to ravish him. He sounds so yummy and hot! I actually love how perverted and sexual he is with her, and I love his pov!

It's funny, because I only checked this again now since it's Friday, and YES you updated! How lucky am I? I love you for that, seriously! I was going crazy, dying for an update, so thanks for that. This story has seriously got me hooked. When I read like the first chapter, I was like, Hm...this sounds interesting, but reading it more, it's becoming more and more wonderful!

I honestly feel for Addison. She seems like a wonderful person, so she doesn't deserve her father's horridity. LOL, I don't think that's a word but oh well. It's my new word. I'm really going crazy trying to figure out what is going on with Nathan. Like a million scenarios are fucking running around my head. WHY DID HE MOVE? It seems like there is a HUGE reason to why he moved and I need to know now. NOW NOW NOW! I know I'm crazy, so sorry. :(

So I'm going to go ahead and PM you again from my friend's FP account, since I don't have one yet. Because I think you are a lovely person. But you have a tendency to leave these mean cliffhangers on your stories that drive me crazy, so we need to get that fixed. LOL, I'm only kidding. I love you. And I effing love your writing. Even if it drives me crazy with anticipation.

Also, I'd like to let you know that I am 'anticipating' the next update because I NEED IT. You see, I might even die if I don't give it to me. You wouldn't want me to die, would you? WOULD YOU?

See? So, this all comes back to: I love you and I need you to update soon, okay? Thanks so much.

XOXOXO

JUDITH

RAWR

Please update ASAP )

hey...good story...keep writing :)

I love the tory alot and her dad is such a jerk saying that so please please please please please UPDATE!

YELLO HELLO HELLO HI!

I really REALLY am addicted to this story so far, it's only the third chapter, but I am completely hooked. I'm waiting very anxiously for the next. I love very much how you update both of your stories every week. It shows dedication and it's very convenient for readers. I love this story. I love this story.I love this story.I love this story, need I say it again? I love Nathan too, even though hes an ass. He still sounds really yummy. XD I would very much love a guy like him that so obviously flirted with me.

I understand what Addison is going through, and you portray her character very well. I think you are QUITE talented at writing. I also like how Cloe and Monica are those best friends that EVERYONE needs to have. They are there for Addison all the time.

Her father is a jerk, period. He really needs to get a reality check. I understand where Addison is coming from, I would NEVER forgive my mother if she ever did that to me. That's just plain horrible. Unless the mother has an explanation that we find out about later. But, anywho, I feel for Addison. It sucks to have parents that don't care for you! Good thing that Nathan is around to keep her company, eh? ;) HUH, HUH? She needs to understand that SHE HAS THE HOTS FOR HIM AND NEEDS TO RAVISH HIM RIGHT AWAY.

I know, I'm dumb. Oh well. :( I just love your story a lot. And serious kudos for you on that, because it doesn't happen usually. And this is only the third chapter! I just can't wait for the next chapter anymore, I need it now! Nathan and Addison have so much chemistry, like when he backed her against the wall and stuff, that was hot. LOL. He made her breathless though, c'mon she can't deny that he's the right guy for her. He can fix her! And he sounds JUST SO SMEXY! I know, I'm really weird. Well, I'm going to keep checking back for the next chapter, because I'm addicted. Love this so much.

XOXOXOJUDITHXOXOXOXO

HUGS AND KISSES:D