|Reviews for The Hippogriffs|
| StoryMonster chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
That last para was completely random (the one with the weird fon definition stuff) and the title shouldn't have mentioned 'Need a better Title' - it discourage the reader.
But other than that it was alright.
| Chelsea Grin chapter 1 . 1/30/2010
are u gonna contiinue? i think its nice ] haha i hope u continue, theres many confusing parts like y humans are the enemies of the animals... youll explain wont u?;)