Reviews for 80
Casino Kat chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Very sad. But fantastically written. Your use of words really captured my attention. :)
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
haunting poem. very good. Id see why you want to die first before your lover does. keep writing! Can you check out my poem please :) 'one too many mistakes'
KCanna chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Dude... you just ruined my day! D:


But it is pretty depressing. Possibly because it's true.

I like the repetition of the last three lines.

In all honesty, this is too short and sad for me to give a major critique, so I apologize :P But good job writing it!

I'm gonna go watch some happy movies now.
Gone with the tide chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
This is so sad, but so sweet. The repetition is used very well, too. I love it!
blueSKIES247 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
really good. the repetition is a nice effect. really good.