|Reviews for These Broken Pieces|
| Demelza Jacobs chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
wow. that really works. it's disturbing but hot as hell. I think you should make this into to full fledged story I think it would do really well. :)
| je ne veux pas travailler chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
i can't believe anyone hasn't reviewed this yet.