| Reviews for These Broken Pieces |
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   Demelza Jacobs chapter 1 . 11/14/2012 wow. that really works. it's disturbing but hot as hell. I think you should make this into to full fledged story I think it would do really well. :) |
| je ne veux pas travailler chapter 1 . 2/8/2010 i can't believe anyone hasn't reviewed this yet. amazing story! |