WOW
This is a fantastic opening. Incredibly gripping and draws me right in. I look forward to reading more

I realize its been a long time since this was written, so I don't know if you'll see this but, I just loved this and had to leave a review. I don't normally read high school fics, but I made an exception for this one. The characters were so wonderfully fleshed out and human (flaws and all), their interactions fantastic, and the romance was really cute. The premise was neat as well, and I quite enjoyed your writing style. You have that rare gift of focusing on just the right amount of detail - where it actually matters - without getting bogged down by it. Anyway, although i can't say this story isn't without its flaws (the ending felt a bit abrupt, for one) I enjoyed it immensely. Many many kudos!

You have this very easy going way of story telling. It isn't grand or flashy, nor is it mind-blowing or even all that great. Oh god, I sound like I'm insulting you, but that's not what I mean. This was just...natural. I admit you lost me here and there, and that the grammar could be touched up, but this was so nice. It...it was more about the dynamic between the characters, which were fleshed out to near perfection, and I think that is the reason why I've enjoyed this so much! Thank you for the entertainment!

I really liked this story, it is a very captivating read.

First of all, Shout Out to DOCTOR WHO! Second of all, your story was really awesome. Character developpement, plot, and everything.

Wow! I really don't understand why this has so little reviews! This was a really good story. I believe I'll be recommending this one to a few people. Thank you for such a fantastic read!

I can't believe that this is only like the second review this story has got. I loved this story, I just wanted it to go on and on, and I wanted there to be a sequel. So, if you ever feel the need to write one, please do :)

Anyway, I liked the romance/scifi mix this story had (reminded me of the Time-Traveller's Wife) and the development of all the characters, and although it could be a little cheesy in places, the story was nicely done. Well done.

Kya~ First review (I hope). I cannot tell you how amazingly awesome it is that you're on fictionpress now! xD I've read Time Lifts the Light on Mibba, so here I am now to read it again on fictionpress! 3 The creepy part is is that I first saw you on Quizilla and followed you to Mibba...and here I am now, following you to Fictionpress! D8 FTW! lol! That's just too weird...

Eh...you might wanna check how this first chapter looks, there's a bunch of mumbo jumbo that no doubt FP has left behind. That's probably a bug or something, I don't know, but that has happened to me before. :/ Forgot how though, I haven't posted anything in a long time, and I took down all my (-COUGHsuckyCOUGH-) stories for vague reasons.

P.S. Yeah. I loved this story the first time, so that's all I really have to say. Humorously romantic and keeps the reader's attention, I think I'm going to forward this to a friend of mine. FP is a good place to get critique though (not to mention lovers and haters, but that's inevitable), if the right person comes along.

~ANYWAYS, HAPPY WriTiNG! ;D Kekyo (GT)