Creepy, but very much like real fairy tales.

Holy wow! That was definitely unexpected, but I loved it! I'm a huge fan of dark stories like this )

Nice work!

Very tragic ending. I like it! It's like the emo older brother of The Giving Tree.

though you wrote the story as a mythology, fantasy story. this story, this love, this illusion is very realistic

fantastic job

This is very beautiful. I love your descriptive language and skillful word choice. Also, it is very creative and the characters are realistic. Well, at least as realistic as a thinking tree can be. It is rather grotesque, yet portrays well the frightening blindness of love long suppressed. Well done.

wow, that was really dark, yet amazing at the same time.

Somewhat of an angsty piece of work, eh?

But at the same time, I feel that the nature of it was still very pure and pretty. I loved this story:] I'd so buy this if it was a fairy tale book:D

That was amazing.

Fun to see you writing again! A nice warped little fairy tale. You really should do this more often!

This was really romantic and sad. I enjoyed it a lot :) Thank you for sharing.