Reviews for Without You
thisisbrighteyesx3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
amazing, i can relate to this!

Isca chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
"When the only thing we were killing was time." Wow. I like the idea here that the speaker believes that her and her lover are now "killing themselves" with romance.
64312 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I found this poem intriguing in the sense that it had a lot of different concepts twirled around the main idea, and is free to interpretation. This line especially, 'And now time is standing still...Again' - That's a really powerful line. This poem is beautiful.
believe in her chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Tragically beautiful.

Keep writing.
wayfaringstrangers chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I agree. :/ I really like this.

(It's horrible when someone you

love leaves you; you miss them

terribly and can't go on with-

out them. (sigh) I miss him...)

This just brings back memories..